Esther Sylvester

*gives pancakes* Thank you. Do you have recommendations for the spacing? Also, (and I'm not being defensive) what about the title indicated that this work would be sloppy? Would you ...

You have earned your pancakes and more! Would you like them mailed to you? Thank you also for your speedy reply, as the rough draft is due soon. Thank you ...

Hey Darkheart! I found your story to be very charming. Your characterizations were cute and I found the bubble gum catastrophe to be totally endearing. Here are some points for ...

Did I seriously just put my last name there? I guess that's a reflex.

Hi! I'm Esther, nice to meet you. I liked this a lot. It was almost too short for me. I wanted to read more. Maybe you could expand it to ...

Thanks, Ultra. Read the rest of the story to see, Stori. ;)

Thanks. Yeah, I know it isn't quite as good as the other chapters. I'm pretty stuck right now. I'm glad you liked it okay though.

Thanks guys! That means a lot. It makes me happy that someone took the time to read this. I'll look into the errors.

You have a very symbolic point of view. Have you ever tried poetry? I bet you would be good at it. You're welcome.

You're welcome! I'm glad I could help. Like I said, I love this so far and I do like the voice just like the review above said. You know, after ...

Thanks guys, I appreciate all of the help! Since now I am back from vacation I should be able to post more now! Thanks again.

Thank you! You both helped a lot. KD, thank you for warning me about plot drag. I am a little aware of it, but I wasn't sure if I was ...

Thank you very much!

Wow, thank you very much. I will keep these thoughts in mind, thank you.

Thank you so much guys! I have gone through and edited the work so far. It looks a lot better now, thank you.